...yeah. You told me that you had some original song lyrics that I might be interested in seeing, and said when I asked, you'd start a thread. Well, I'll make that thread...I'm just asking for the lyrics...
...yeah.
...Kinda rambling, I know, but...yeah.

...yeah. You told me that you had some original song lyrics that I might be interested in seeing, and said when I asked, you'd start a thread. Well, I'll make that thread...I'm just asking for the lyrics...
...yeah.
...Kinda rambling, I know, but...yeah.


I don't have them with me right now. But I bring them in tommorrow(I don't clearly remember them).

Sorry about that, since I use the library's internet, I don't always have everything with me.

Well, I have 2 songs based off of Chobits.
Both of these songs are in rough form and I plan to tweak them abit.

Searching: This song is about Hideki looking for Chi. It's kinda simple since it doesn't use their names in the song.

Verse 1:
I enjoy being with you
you always learn something new
then one day you were taken away
I hope that you're not in pain

Chorus:
If you are lost, I'll look for you
if you are hurt, I'll comfort you
if you are lost, I'll look for you
hopefully I'll find you

Verse 2:
Now I am searching for you
I don't know what to do
I will keep on looking
getting you back safely

Chorus:
If you are lost, I'll look for you
if you are hurt, I'll comfort you
if you are lost, I'll look for you
hopefully I'll find you

Verse 3:
We are back together again
you weren't hurt from it
I'm glad to be with you
We've learned something new

Chorus:
If you are lost, I'll look for you
if you are hurt, I'll comfort you
if you are lost, I'll look for you
hopefully I'll find you
If you are lost, I'll look for you
if you are hurt, I'll comfort you
if you are lost, I'll look for you
finally I have found you

Encased Shodown: Originally this song was about something else. I changed what it was about after one point when I didn't like the original idea. Based off Chobits in general, this one shows it more because of some of the references(Especially with the "City with no people" theme).
This song will go through more changes lyrically since I am not satisfied with what I wrote.

Verse 1:(note, I'll be putting quotation marks around what I will change)
I am waiting for someone to come and take me home
Feeling so dormant, no need to be alone
"I sad and melancholic, a past so troublesome"
in this city is no one, they are all in their homes

Chorus 1(I'm omitting this chorus, I don't like how it turned out)
I will follow it, you will never know i'm gone
I will move away, you will never miss me
and when it is true, it will upon you
and then you will see, gentle understanding

Verse 2:
Is it more fun with them, my thought in question
it can take a person's place, but it can't become someone
you have brought me to your home, are you the one for me
"is it because I'm one of them, a thought that I feel"

Chorus 1

Verse 3:(This one needs tidied up abit, other than that it's my favorite verse)
My twin and I are planning for a hoped filled ending
I have found my someone, but I can't do one thing
if I did I would, say goodbye to my only one
In this city is no one, they are happy in their homes

Chorus 1
Chorus 2(This chorus is much better, I'm keeping it)
I will take a look, understanding what went wrong
I will make a change, to better my new beginning
the things we can do, are what make me and you
the things that we can't, make us whole completely

I'm curious, what other anime do you watch?

Bump!

Bump!!!!

Step-chan, is there as specific tune for those lyrics of yours?

Step-chan, is there as specific tune for those lyrics of yours?


Their originals. I play guitar and have the riffs for them(and recordings of them too). I think Airrider forgot about starting this thread, so I'll have to remind him.

I know the chords I use(both songs are in standard tuning).

Searching:

Verse
D 2 2 2      5
A 2 2 2      5
E 0 0 0 0 0 3

Chorus
G 444 / 6 / 4444 2222
D 444 / 6 / 4444 2222
A 222 / 4 / 2222 0000
(The chorus is something like that, the last two chords in the riff might be strummed 3 times each)

Encased Showdown:
(This one is more complex, so I'll just show the chords to use. I don't have alot time left so I won't how I play it).

Verse
G 2 5 2 5 2 5
D 2 5 2 5 2 5 5
A 0 3 0 3 0 3 5
E                  3
(This is the pattern of the chords, but not how many times I strum them)

Chorus
G 2 5 7 9 5 9 7 5 2 5 2 5 7 9 5 9 7 5 2 5
D 2 5 7 9 5 9 7 5 2 5 2 5 7 9 5 9 7 5 2 5
A 0 3 5 7 3 7 5 3 0 3 0 3 5 7 3 7 5 3 0 3
(Like the first set, this is just the progression, but not how many times I strum them).

http://home.swbell.net/dfjulien/highlandhillside/liralen.jpg

For Airrider.

*gasp gasp gasp*
*slumps over*
...BACK!
Oh, and thanks for everything on the thread!
Say, any of you seen something I THINK I posted recently?
...Never mind, I found it.

http://www.inthe00s.com/index.php/topic,11308.0.html

Check this out!

A fanfic thread? I think I might do something and post it on there if it is cool with you. :)

Go right ahead, give me some feedback if you want to, too.

Go right ahead, give me some feedback if you want to, too.


I'll have to write it first, it would be a story based on my "Avril's songs make me constipated" parody. A story form of it, that is.

;D